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Writing Module 5: Giving Feedback and Revising the Draft

Once students are done with their writing, they need feedback to help them revise and improve on the piece. This course takes teachers through the reasons for giving feedback and examines what constitutes feedback. With reference to a piece of research done in Singapore on teacher feedback, teachers will learn about the different types of feedback and how to write that feedback. 

When to give feedback is another issue discussed and the concept of feedforward is introduced and explained. Once the feedback has been given, students must do the revision. Two types of revision, surface and deep revision, are presented and teachers learn how to teach these types of revision. Throughout, teachers will have opportunies to do hands on practice with sample essays. 

Introduction 04:17 

Why Revise 01:34 

What is Feedback?  03:20

Types of Feedback 04:21

When and How to give feedback 08:26

Surface and Deep Revision 08:25

Feedforward 01:28

Conclusion 01:23

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Dr Yin Mee Cheah

Yin Mee Cheah is a partner and the principal consultant at Learning Ventures. Yin Mee’s mission, through Learning Ventures, is to inspire teachers to be lifelong learners and impactful educators.

Yin Mee has been a popular in-service trainer to primary schools in Singapore since 1998.  She has taught more than 800 in-service courses in over 150 primary schools in Singapore. Her more popular courses included courses on reading, writing, oral skills and assessment.

Yin Mee has been in the education service for 40 years. Between 1985 and 1998, Yin Mee was a lecturer at the National Institute of Education where she was a pioneer specializing in the training of pre and in-service primary school teachers. Before that she spent several years teaching in a secondary school and a junior college.

Yin Mee has also worked as a linguistic and education consultant to publishers, learning centres, IT companies, schools, and the Ministry of Education.

Yin Mee’s academic achievements:
•Ph.D. (Education) 1994, University of California at Berkeley
Dissertation: Language and Cultural Identity: An ethnographic study of English language education in Singapore
• M.A. (Education) 1987, Stanford University
• Dip. Appl. Linguistics (with distinction) 1984, RELC, Singapore
• Dip. Ed., 1979, Institute of Education, National University of Singapore
• B.A. (Hons.) 2nd Upper, 1977, University of Malaya

Learning Ventures

Learning Ventures was established in 1998 and  provides courses in English language pedagogy and professional communication for teachers. These courses include the teaching of reading, writing, listening, grammar, oral communication and assessment skills. Courses on professional writing and communication in school settings for teachers’ own personal development are also available.